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The Forsaken: Chapter One by ~RSFOX:iconRSFOX:



Intro:
     Metrotech city, a large city filled with life and several secrets kept within it. Secrets that individuals keep to themselves… and secrets that the City hides underneath it all… This is the place where ‘things’ go down.

Chapter One: A Normal Morning

     A scruffy yet handsome looking cat made his way down the semi-busy sidewalk. This cats fur was pure black but wore a odd suit, all blue in color including a jacket that was buckled from the neck down. This cat also had bright emerald green eyes, and an ear that was nipped at its very top. Other things that stuck out from this strange character was that his hands and the end of his tail were wrapped up in bandages. The cat held a bundle of roses in one hand and his other in his pocket as he continued to walk with a little spring in his step and a clever tune being hummed.
     Suddenly a slick black car drove up along side of this cat and stopped. The cat did the same. The tinted window glass slowly lowered to reveal the face of a wolf who had a dark red/brown fur color. This character was also in the same uniform as the cat. His deep gray eyes stared at the cat.
     “…Get in” the wolf said before putting the window back up. The cat ran too and entered the passenger side. The car began to drive off.
     The cat sighed and rested the flowers on his lap, then began to look out the window. The wolf glanced off the road and at his partner for a second.
     “Paco, what’s up with the roses?” The wolf asked in a slight confused tone.
     “Well, you never know when you might bump into somebody.” Paco responded, still looking out the window.
     “oh no… Are you talking about those crazy bounty hunter sisters again?” The wolf asked.
     “Oh c’mon, Rocky! Who else do I talk about!?” Paco said sarcastically.
     “Every cute girl you lay eyes on…” Rocky the wolf answered immediately with a smirk on his face. Paco gave him a leer before turning back to the window, resting his head on his hand.
     “Aw, c’mon! You know I’m just screwin’ with you.” Rocky said as he gave a punch to paco’ arm.
     “Yeah… I know.” Paco said as he rubbed his now slightly soar arm, “I wonder what they’re doing right now…”
     “Probably out there right now stopping some sort of chaos… or starting it. Maybe both.”

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     A female gray cat with dark streaks in her hair, dressed in a pair of sweat pants and a T-shirt, rested on top of a bed sprawled out with the bed sheets twisted around her legs. A noise was heard making the cats eyes open sleepily, when her vision returned to normal she saw another gray female cat but this one had much lighter streaks in her hair which was tied into a pony tail. This cat was the others younger sister. She stood only inches from the bed with a cheesy grin and a sweat drop forming on the side of her head.
     “Hey Lilly!” the light gray cat said much louder then she had too which made the other cat flinch.
     “Oi…. What’s up Ivy?” Lilly said drowsily as she sat up on her bed rubbing her eyes.
     “uh, nothing much! I just wanted to know where we keep that red thingy with the hose that sprays out the foam stuff.” Ivy said with her grin growing more cheesier then before.
     “Try looking under the sink.” Lilly said as she stretched her arms out. Ivy gave a quick nod and ran out of the bedroom in a hurry. It only took a couple seconds more before Lilly’s eyes widened when she realized that something was definitely wrong.
     “Ivy what’d you do!?” Lilly yelled as she nearly fell on her face from the twisted sheets around her legs. Suddenly a boom was heard fallowed by an ‘EEK!’. Lilly untangled herself and sprinted into the next room. There she saw Ivy in the kitchen spraying the fire extinguisher at a fire coming from the stove.
     “Don’t worry Lill! I have this situation totally under control!” Ivy said turning to Lilly real quick giving her a salute when another explosion was heard from the stove making her jump in surprise. She continued to spray the growing fire.
     “Man…” Lilly moaned, slapping her own hand on her face, “Next time, I’m making breakfast.”

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     On the edge of the city’s park, Rob leans against the trunk of a tree, under it’s shadows. His face that seemed to be in deep meditation lifted off of his chest and opened his once closed eyes. He stood up from the tree and turned around to face a museum that was across the street. A smirk crawled onto his face as he took several steps backward before turning around completely making his way through the park.
©2005-2010 ~RSFOX
:iconrsfox:

Author's Comments

Ok! Sorry about the wait but school started for me so it's been hard to find time to do anything productive on this. Anyway, here's where it begins. I've also added some new characters in there. I'm going to eventually put up pictures I drew of the main characters that are in this story, later...

hope you enjoy.

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:iconjgirl:
YOU RAWK OMFG AWESOME story *-* keep it ups

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I will be nicer if you give me chocolate. =]
:iconrsfox:
bleh... it's really short. I'll try to make them longer ^^;

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"Yeah... I'm going to blow this up *points to random object* just because I can..." -My dad ^_^;

"Don't eat that cookie! ...It's healthy." -My mom <.<;
:iconrsfox:
O.O

thank you ^^;

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"Yeah... I'm going to blow this up *points to random object* just because I can..." -My dad ^_^;

"Don't eat that cookie! ...It's healthy." -My mom <.<;
:iconchristhehalfwerewolf:
Great job once again Rob!
You may want to try Kennings though, they might help you with descriptions.
I can hardly wait for the next part man!

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World of Green
Lost in the Dream
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When worlds collide and reality breaks... what side will you be on?
:iconrsfox:
hmm... mabye I'll try that. thanks for the tip.
And thanks again for the fav =D

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"Yeah... I'm going to blow this up *points to random object* just because I can..." -My dad ^_^;

"Don't eat that cookie! ...It's healthy." -My mom <.<;

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